Wednesday, July 14, 2021

6/11 -Jaden Reese -Second Story

    Okay so this story is a little bit longer than the one before and I'm sorry for that but I thought you should read the whole thing so you can get the whole effect of how the story goes. 

    One beautiful day there was a house that was like no other house. It was shaped differently and a different color every day. That day a girl named Jean moved into the house down the street from it. Everyday she would ride her bike to school and would pass it. It made her nervous to be around it. Since it made her nervous she tried to avoid it, so she went the long way back and forth from her house and the school. One day she went the long way and there were people working on the road near the house she was afraid of. Then she got closer and saw that they were not fixing the road that they were putting up caution tape. She went up to one of the people that was on the road and asked “what is going on!” the man said “There had be a murder here!” The girl was terrified so she went home but it was later that night so she told her mom in the morning, Her mom said “she has to hurry to school, you will be late!” The girl begged her mom not to go, But sadly she had to go. She passed the house and hurried past it. When she got there a new girl was there. Jean went up to the girl and said “hello.” The girl and Jean became friends. One day the girl asked if Jean could spin the night with her. Jean's mom said yes, so after school they walked to the girls house. Jean noticed that the girl lived on her street, but she had never seen the girl before. She thought it was odd. When they got to her house Jean Gasped, She saw the old house that she was trying to avoid. It seems that the girl lives in the house. Jean tried so hard not to cry, the girl asked what was wrong Jean said it's nothing even knowing it was something. They went inside and went to the girls bedroom. They hung out for a while,Then Jean asked about the house being a different color every day. The girl said “Her grandma has this condition that she has to paint something every night.”Jean said “oh okay” The girl said “why do you ask.”Jean said “I pass this house everyday and it is always a different color, I thought it was haunted.” The girl then went over to her bed and bent down to get something from under the bed. The girl pulled out a big old box. She sat the box on the bed, so Jean went over there to see what was in the box. There were a bunch of newspapers in the box. The girl pulled out the newspapers and sat them on her bed. Jean looked through them and she saw that on every single one of them it said murder on it. Jean read closer and it says that the last one was yesterday, then Jean gasped. The girl asked what it was and Jean said  “I saw people putting up caution tape yesterday.” The girl looked at Jean and said “were you there to see the body?” Jean said “Yes I saw the Body, why.” The girl then began to cry. Jean asked what was wrong and the girl said “You're going to die tonight!” Jean said “What do you mean I’m going to die tonight.” The girl said “If you see a body and then come into this house you will not leave this house unless you are carried out by a body bag..” The reason you will only leave in a body bag is because if you have seen a dead body the house turns that against you because the house is haunted. Jean then started crying. So that night Jean was going downstairs with the girl then all of a sudden Jean was locked in a room that had something in the corner of it. She went to look at what was in the corner, she then couldn’t move because there was something there. Then the thing came out of the corner and it was a ghost. The ghost said that she will make a deal with you. Jean was scared but said okay anyways. The ghost said the only way you will live is if you do a favor and Jean was not sure about this but then said okay. The ghost said that the deal is that if Jean lives then the ghost gets to live in her body till she dies. Jean was unhappy with this and said no way to this request. Because the ghost was so eager to get out the house and could not without being with someone living the ghost said you already made the deal. So that day forward the ghost remained in her body until she died, Then when Jean died the ghost went back to the house and started over on her journey.

1 comment:

  1. 10/11-Ashton Timms

    This was a very interesting, keep you on your toes, type of story. I really enjoyed the twist and turns. I have a few suggestions. Their is a few words that are misspelled and a few words that need to be changed. When the girl invites her over to stay the night it says spind where it should be spend. This story could be taken to another level with more details and turns. I also really like the uniqueness in the name Jean and in the part about how if you see the body you can’t leave the house alive. Overall I really enjoyed this story and the creativity behind it! Great job!

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