I know I said there was only going to be two but I made one I could not just let go to waste so here is another story called The Park. The title may not go with the story but that is all I could come up with. The story is about a group of girls that will learn their lesson to be careful who they talk to because it may turn out different then what they think.
One day a girl named Morgan went to the park with her friends and they hung out all night. That night she and her friends were talking on the phone with random people and were making half of them mad because they were prank calling them. That night was a night they would never forget. When the sun went down everyone was on their way home, Then they all heard a phone ring. They looked to see if it was their phone but it wasn’t. They looked everywhere to find the phone that was ringing. And it would not stop, but then all of a sudden the phone stopped. They all heard a voice that came out of nowhere. The voice kept talking about how there was something going down tonight, at the park. The group of friends all looked at each other and were like we should stay to see what happens, so they all agreed. So they waited and waited until they heard the phone ring again, So they went searching for it and they found the phone. The phone had a weird look to it. It was all black, But the back had all of the friends' initials on it. They all looked at each other and answered the phone. They could only hear the voice of the stranger from before, But this time it was speaking to them directly. It said that they should not have called the numbers they did because their location was now taken. This didn’t make sense to the girls until Morgan realized that the guy on the phone was actually her older brother, scaring them because he overheard them on the phone with strangers earlier and wanted to make sure they didn’t do it again and that is the end of this story folks.
Your mind will always be an intriguing thing since there is always something going on. You and your stories are always very fun to read since I never know where they are heading even though our weird conversations should give me some ideas. You should write more. I feel like you could go somewhere with it. I think you could have gone in a different direction with the title but titles are awful to figure out for me so I understand why “The Park” was appealing cause I probably would have done that myself. I hope you continue with your stories, I am a big fan.
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