5/11 -Jaden Reese - First Story
Hey I'm having some trouble coming up with something to write about so I thought I would share one or two of the stories I wrote a couple years ago When I had nothing to do in some classes. Now this blog may be about one of the stories and another one may be about the other, so here it goes and please tell me how I could possibly make them better. The name of the first one that I will be sharing is Scare. It's about a school and a crazy incident that has since then changed everyone who walks into it.
It was a dark and stormy night, the wind blew hard on the people’s faces, making it hard for everyone to see where they were going. While they were walking they saw what seemed like a group of people just standing around a tree in front of the school, not knowing what they were doing they went to investigate, But what they found will scare you. Meg is a girl that no one knows because she was a very shy and quiet girl and never really talked to anyone, but she liked it that way. She goes to a school that was named after an accident that happened 30 years ago. The name of the school was Bradford high school but because of the incidents that occurred everyone called it Baby cries High. I know what you're thinking. Is it haunted? Are there creepy people that go there? What really happened during that night? Well let me explain how it came to be. One day at the stroke of midnight, there was a girl who was at the time carrying a baby in her arms, and well she was known for getting herself into things she couldn’t handle. At the time the girl was going to a school party with the baby in hand, but she didn’t realize what danger she could be in because of who she was but to this day no one seems to actually know who she was because her family had everything covered up. It is said that if you go to the school after hours and at midnight you will hear a baby cry like it is in the walls and it can be so loud that they get noise complaints from the surrounding houses. On October 4th Meg was at a coffee shop and she overheard a group of kids around her age talking about the legend of the girl and well Meg was intrigued by this because she went to the school but never heard of what they was say, so she decided to but in and tell them that she goes there and that they should go to the school at the time it happened. Everyone was all for it and was ready to go so Meg went with the group and as they got closer to the school they saw a group of people surrounding a tree which was uncommon because well it was midnight. As they walked up the group of people disappeared and so they thought it was really weird but continued to go into the school and what they heard was none other than the baby that was never found. Thanks for reading.
7/11-Ashton Timms
ReplyDeleteI used to do the same thing in class when I was bored! Writing has always been a hobby of mine, especially making up short stories. I love the mystery and questions that pop into your head as you are reading it. I think if you lengthened the end it would be an even more incredible story. Maybe go into detail of what the school looked like or the conversations her and the group had. Maybe make it a prank someone plays like a recorder in the walls to keep people from stealing or maybe make it more haunted where they come face to face with something or never leave the building.